Commit, Commit, Commit – haiku

Aug22


Sneaks in the side door
Black hood pulled low covers face
Thrusts note to teller

Frayed and so afraid
Lashing out asking for help
Answer is commit

Dressed in black and white
Their fingers weaved together
Lifetime commitment

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6 thoughts on “Commit, Commit, Commit – haiku”

  4. Thank you Tara, 4joy, and Shakira! I appreciate your comments – and that’s what I was trying to convey – the different meanings of that simple word, commit 🙂

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